Looking for feedback

Hi everyone I am looking for some feedback on a song I wrote, I have it up on youtube but I thought many of you may also enjoy it. It is called This Mist, and is about friendship.

here is the link, any feedback is most welcome as I hope to improve as a musician/songwriter.

youtube.com/watch?v=U69Lw98o-LQ

just copy it into the browser, i am not sure how to hyperlink on here lol

not bad

thanks, I am hoping any feed back I get will help me to improve. The song is a little rough but I think with some fine tuning it will be better.

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